I reject 50% of the bullet points my clients give me. Why?

I reject 50% of the bullet points my clients give me. Why?

Most job seekers think a great resume is a complete log of everything they’ve done at their job.

When clients hand me their old resumes, they often wonder why I cut out massive chunks of what they considered "hard work." Here is the truth: Hiring managers don't care about your effort; they care about your impact.

If a bullet point explains how busy you were instead of how valuable you were, it gets cut.

* Before the edit: "Managed daily administrative operations and coordinated team schedules." (Tells me you were busy.)

* After the edit: "Streamlined daily operations and reduced scheduling conflicts by 30% for a 15-person team." (Tells me you created value.)

A resume isn't a history lesson. It's a marketing document. If your current resume reads like a daily task log, you’re making the employer do the math; and trust me, they won't.

Why women love us:

  • Daily articles on career topics
  • Jobs at companies dedicated to hiring more women
  • Advice and support from an authentic community
  • Events that help you level up in your career
  • Free membership, always

Share your insight

Join an authentic community that helps women support each other at work. Share your professional experience or ask for advice — you can even post anonymously.

3 Comments

Join the conversation
  1. Anonymous

    Well what else is a resume supposed to be?

  2. Anonymous

    So how do we transform our resumes from listing skills and the professional task, which shows experience to an impactful resume.

  3. Anonymous

    Thanks for helping job seekers with this. What they need to do, and often don't have experience to do, is to put themselves in the shoes of the employer. What is going to make the company more prosperous and how will they contribute. Love your example.

Browse recent posts

Fairygodboss VIP
Achieve your career goals.
Be part of the largest online career community for women to find jobs, advice, and support — for free.
Fairygodboss members