I am composing an to my Supervisor for a salary increase highlighting my value to the agency and my expanded role.

I am composing an to my Supervisor for a salary increase highlighting my value to the agency and my expanded role. Can I have some suggestions of the format of the email and do I cc HR or the Supervisor and her boss? Thank you

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  1. Anonymous

    Is this an email? I think you left out a word. If it is, I would suggest you re-think unless you have had a 1:1 meeting and discussed this, and that is what you were directed to do. Instead, I would put together a printed document, similar to how you would set up a resume, that lists your job functions (from the job description) and a list of quantified (i.e. numeric representations) of how you met each job requirement. If you were to sell a specific dollar amount or number of units, list your actual revenue and unit count. If you were supposed to address a number of client's problems, show how you met or exceeded those numbers. The more you can highlight your value to the company, the better, as the bottom line is that they are looking for those who have contributed the most to the company's profitability (if for-profit) or mission (if non-profit) for merit increases.

    Once you have the document together, schedule a 1:1 with your manager, and indicate you feel you are eligible (state company policy as you understand it) for a merit (or other type of) increase. Review the accomplishments with the manager and let them take the document. Your manager is responsible for " selling" the raise to the higher-ups, so it is not wise to go over their head(s) and include HR and upper management.

    A couple of cautions:

    Only do this by email if that was suggested in a 1:1 meeting with your manager. Only include the people indicated by your manager.

    Take into account the company's financial position. Are they going through a severe economic downturn? If a non-profit, are their donations down? Factor this into your narrative and how your actions are essential in correcting that situation.

  2. Anonymous

    Thank you so much! The word I left out is *email. I will ask for a meeting first. Thank you The reason I was thinking of including HR is because my supervisor does not have my best interest she has often undermined and taken my ideas and presented them as her own

  3. Anonymous

    However you email or discuss, be sure to have concrete explanation of successes at firm.

  4. Anonymous

    An email with no advance notice will not win hearts and minds. It will blindside everyone you choose to include. I agree with the other poster to set up an in person meeting and tell you boss ahead of time that you’d like to discuss a salary adjustment based on your expanded role.

    Also agree with other comments about bring concrete examples of your expanded role and performance metrics. I’d hit hard and fast with any data you can get a hold of.

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