Soooo - there is a lot here. Just because you hired someone to redo your profile does not mean that they did a good job. And just because you are reaching out to people - does not mean that you are crafting a good message that will make them want to respond.
Also - your resume needs to clearly match the job description and really show off your skills - by highlighting specific accomplishments using numbers and quantitative data and showing how the results benefitted your employer.
Here is an example of a message that I sent to quite a few people who I found when I searched for people who were in the HR are recruiting field in the nonprofit industry:
Hi!
I’m reaching out because I am in the market for a new opportunity, and I understand you recruit for positions in the nonprofit field. Here is the type of role where I can bring the most value:
Position — full-time, regular, 100% remote position in the nonprofit or higher education fields
Example Titles — Grants Manager/research Support Manager – I’m not looking for a grant-writing position but rather managing grantees or helping research organizations put together their applications and help with post-award activities
I would love the opportunity to explain further how I can bring value to a company and role. Thank you for taking the time to consider my request, and have a great day!
I had 2 recruiters offer to help me.
I have obtained 1 job on LinkedIn and 2 from Indeed.
Good luck and hang in there - the job market is brutal these days!
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